Polishing

Head & Cave (My Title, A closeup of The Real World :: Tom Otterness 1992)

I just spent a bit of time polishing up Expedition Real World -- making some tweaks to sentences and adding a couple of new sentences here and there.  Some changes were to fix grammar, others to make smoother transitions between points, still others to make new points.  Nothing major, just another example of needing to remember to Write, Edit, Repeat.  Oh, and maybe to proof and not rely on spell check!?!?

Bottoms Up (My Title, a close up of The Real World :: Tom Otterness 1992)